Final Paper
(Corrected by teacher)
CREATIVE ESSAY
OUT LINE
T.S. “To fall in love is to create a religión that has a falible god”. (Borges)
I. Introductio
a) A short definition of falling and being in love.
b) The “halo” song.
II. How is to be and to fall in love.
III. The way you “see” that special person.
IV. The way you feel towards him.
V. Conclusion.
ESSAY
“To fall in love is to create a religion that has a fallible god.” According to Borges, this phrase defines how is to have a crush with someone, to fall in love. It sounds like to fall in love with someone is to have your personal god, to find an angel just for you. And to be conscious of the fact that this god is not a perfect one. But no matter he could fail you, you will still believe him/her; you will be stick to him/her. Because he/she will be your everything. That is to fall in love in a short definition. In the next lines we will go deeply defining this feeling by checking out the lyrics of the song “Halo” by Beyoncé. This lyrics describes how is to be and to fall in love with someone. The way in which you “see” your soulmate through your “enamoured eyes.” How you feel towards him, and the way in which he changes your world.
To be in love with someone is to tumble down your protecting walls. Those walls that do not let you fall in love with that special person. To fall in love is to permit the other person get in your heart forever when there is no doubt about your feelings towards him. It is to remove your fears away, to let your heart totally open to that special person. Even when you swore you would never fall again, as Beyoncé said, you overcome that feeling. Because loving someone is not like to be falling.
The way you “see” that unique person through your enamoured eyes, is like he/she was so special, so different to all the people in this world. It is like that person were an angel. An angel with a beautiful halo that invites you to have him, to be the owner of such celestial being. When falling in love with someone, you cannot be aware of his/her mistakes. Instead of noticing them, you feel those errors as charming characteristics of him/her.
The way you feel towards that special person is like he/she were your superhero. You perceive his/her presence as a protecting embrace, as if everything would be o.k. just because he/she is with you. It is like he were everything you need and more; your personal sun to burn your darkest night. And you melting away just feeling his/her arms around. You get addicted to him/her when you fall in love.
So, what is to fall in love and to be in love? It is to tumble down your protecting walls, to forget about your fears of fall in love again. It is to “see” that special person as an angel and to feel the necessity of being his/her owner. And that is when you become addicted to him/her; you are in love with him/her, you have falling in love.
“To fall in love is to create a religion that has a fallible god.” According to Borges, this phrase defines how is to have a crush with someone, to fall in love. It sounds like to fall in love with someone is to have your personal god, to find an angel just for you. And to be conscious of the fact that this god is not a perfect one. But no matter he could fail you, you will still believe him/her; you will be stick to him/her. Because he/she will be your everything. That is to fall in love in a short definition. In the next lines we will go deeply defining this feeling by checking out the lyrics of the song “Halo” by Beyoncé. This lyrics describes how is to be and to fall in love with someone. The way in which you “see” your soulmate through your “enamoured eyes.” How you feel towards him, and the way in which he changes your world.
To be in love with someone is to tumble down your protecting walls. Those walls that do not let you fall in love with that special person. To fall in love is to permit the other person get in your heart forever when there is no doubt about your feelings towards him. It is to remove your fears away, to let your heart totally open to that special person. Even when you swore you would never fall again, as Beyoncé said, you overcome that feeling. Because loving someone is not like to be falling.
The way you “see” that unique person through your enamoured eyes, is like he/she was so special, so different to all the people in this world. It is like that person were an angel. An angel with a beautiful halo that invites you to have him, to be the owner of such celestial being. When falling in love with someone, you cannot be aware of his/her mistakes. Instead of noticing them, you feel those errors as charming characteristics of him/her.
The way you feel towards that special person is like he/she were your superhero. You perceive his/her presence as a protecting embrace, as if everything would be o.k. just because he/she is with you. It is like he were everything you need and more; your personal sun to burn your darkest night. And you melting away just feeling his/her arms around. You get addicted to him/her when you fall in love.
So, what is to fall in love and to be in love? It is to tumble down your protecting walls, to forget about your fears of fall in love again. It is to “see” that special person as an angel and to feel the necessity of being his/her owner. And that is when you become addicted to him/her; you are in love with him/her, you have falling in love.
“Halo”- By: Beyoncé
Well, baby they're tumbling down
And they didn't even put up a fight
They didn't even make up a sound
I found a way to let you in
But I never really had a doubt
Standing in the light of your halo
I got my angel now
It's like I've been awakened
Every rule I had you breakin'
It's the risk that I'm takin'
I ain't never gonna shut you out
Everywhere I'm looking now
I'm surrounded by your embrace
Baby I can see your halo
You know you're my saving grace
You're everything I need and more
It's written all over your face
Baby I can feel your halo
Pray it won't fade away
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
Hit me like a ray of sun
Burning through my darkest night
You're the only one that I want
Think I'm addicted to your light
I swore I'd never fall again
But this don't even feel like falling
Gravity can't forget
To pull me back to the ground again
Feels like I've been awakened
Every rule I had you breakin'
The risk that I'm takin'
I'm never gonna shut you out
Everywhere I'm looking now
I'm surrounded by your embrace
Baby I can see your halo
You know you're my saving grace
You're everything I need and more
It's written all over your face
Baby I can feel your halo
Pray it won't fade away
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
Halo, halo
Everywhere I'm looking now
I'm surrounded by your embrace
Baby I can see your halo
You know you're my saving grace
You're everything I need and more
It's written all over your face
Baby I can feel your halo
Pray it won't fade away
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
I can feel your halo halo halo
I can see your halo halo halo
hello greta
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